I am no a poet! Writing is not my passion actually… not good at it. But what I have now is something very new. Lolz!I created a poem! So lolz!
I don’t know how to construct it, what steps to follow or what kind of poem would I create, but I’ve read a lot of poems these days! So nose-bleeding. Maybe they were the reasons why I composed mine.
Actually, I started making it when heading for home just this afternoon. I even had a long walk just to dig my brain and gather flowering words.
“in SOLITUDE” is my working title.
I hope you will have time criticizing, commenting or suggesting.
It would be highly appreciated!
memories… breeze in, expeditiously as a wind; in a seventh heaven, or under the moon not shinin’.
halting it, is no possible like gushing river so unstoppable; purposely and endlessly, it will always heavenly stay.
best if clouds are nine, a moment to unwind; worst when hell freezes over, a time to suffer.
myriad-star memories, so vast so countless; it will forever intrude, … in SOLITUDE!
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in Solitude!
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expeditiously as a wind;
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