in Solitude!

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I am no a poet! Writing is not my passion actually… not good at it. But what I have now is something very new. Lolz!I created a poem! So lolz!

I don’t know how to construct it, what steps to follow or what kind of poem would I create,   but I’ve read a lot of poems these days! So nose-bleeding. Maybe they were the reasons why I composed mine.

Actually, I started making it  when heading for home just this afternoon. I even had a long walk just to dig my brain and  gather flowering words.

“in SOLITUDE” is my working title.

I hope you will have time criticizing, commenting or suggesting.

It would be highly appreciated!

memories… breeze in,
expeditiously as a wind;
in a seventh heaven,
or under the moon not shinin’.

halting it, is no possible
like gushing river so unstoppable;
purposely and endlessly,
it will always heavenly stay.

best if clouds are nine,
a moment to unwind;
worst when hell freezes over,
a time to suffer.

myriad-star memories,
so vast so countless;
it will forever intrude,
… in SOLITUDE!

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  • ErickaPeck

    I guess that to receive the loans from banks you ought to have a great motivation. But, one time I’ve received a car loan, just because I was willing to buy a building.

  • http://ohporoussky.wordpress.com/ Suckingbird Keller

    nice blog :) keep writing

    Oh Porous Sky

  • The Lady in Green Ruffles

    halu! im beck!

    • http://markg87.net mark

      ahehhehe! May Ne Post ako… Punta ka sa HoMe page Ko.. ahhhehh! …Comment ka ha? ahehheh!

  • http://www.mahfreedomwall.blogspot.com zyza

    OMG! tissue hahahahaha

    • http://markg87.net/ admin

      wahahah! … na hala panrapo..

  • http://myunrevealedthoughts.blogspot.com madz

    Hi Mark,

    I guess there’s no right or wrong in writing a poem, as long as you had expressed your feelings. It’s just like a music without the hymn. I used to write poems when I was in high school :)

    God Bless,
    Madz

    • http://markg87.net/ admin

      aheheh!
      tnX you so Much….
      aheheh!

  • dencios

    ayoko ng masyadong malungkot na poem kasi malungkot na ang buhay ko sa dubai kaya daoat hindi na mag dwell sa ganitong feelings.

    try to find hapines, sigurado ako hindi mo lang nakikita pero meron yan, maniwala ka lang :)

    • http://markg87.net/ admin

      aha! agree with you….

      den mag enjot ka lang ja nsa Dubai…

      aheheh!

  • http://pinknotesdiary.blogspot.com Pink Note

    you’re doing good! simple pero rock na poem! Keep it up..=)

    • http://markg87.net/ admin

      wahhah!
      tnX soooo much…ahehhe!
      nahan kayu ko ana nga linE…

      SimPle pEru roCk..ahehheh!

      tnX gain!

  • http://flamindevil.wordpress.com flamindevil

    wow.the poem is really deep.

    hindi ko kayang gumawa ng ganito.hehe

    • http://markg87.net/ admin

      ahahha! kaya Ko yan Dude!
      gawa ka lang…
      u Too will be Shocked!

      ahahhah! TnX for commenting…

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