I am no a poet! Writing is not my passion actually… not good at it. But what I have now is something very new. Lolz!I created a poem! So lolz!
I don’t know how to construct it, what steps to follow or what kind of poem would I create, but I’ve read a lot of poems these days! So nose-bleeding. Maybe they were the reasons why I composed mine.
Actually, I started making it when heading for home just this afternoon. I even had a long walk just to dig my brain and gather flowering words.
“in SOLITUDE” is my working title.
I hope you will have time criticizing, commenting or suggesting.
It would be highly appreciated!
memories… breeze in, expeditiously as a wind; in a seventh heaven, or under the moon not shinin’.
halting it, is no possible like gushing river so unstoppable; purposely and endlessly, it will always heavenly stay.
best if clouds are nine, a moment to unwind; worst when hell freezes over, a time to suffer.
myriad-star memories, so vast so countless; it will forever intrude, … in SOLITUDE!
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in Solitude!
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memories… breeze in,
expeditiously as a wind;
in a seventh heaven,
or under the moon not shinin’.




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nice blog
keep writing
Oh Porous Sky
halu! im beck!
ahehhehe! May Ne Post ako… Punta ka sa HoMe page Ko.. ahhhehh! …Comment ka ha? ahehheh!
OMG! tissue hahahahaha
wahahah! … na hala panrapo..
Hi Mark,
I guess there’s no right or wrong in writing a poem, as long as you had expressed your feelings. It’s just like a music without the hymn. I used to write poems when I was in high school
God Bless,
Madz
aheheh!
tnX you so Much….
aheheh!
ayoko ng masyadong malungkot na poem kasi malungkot na ang buhay ko sa dubai kaya daoat hindi na mag dwell sa ganitong feelings.
try to find hapines, sigurado ako hindi mo lang nakikita pero meron yan, maniwala ka lang
aha! agree with you….
den mag enjot ka lang ja nsa Dubai…
aheheh!
you’re doing good! simple pero rock na poem! Keep it up..=)
wahhah!
tnX soooo much…ahehhe!
nahan kayu ko ana nga linE…
SimPle pEru roCk..ahehheh!
tnX gain!
nice one OMG! hahaha.
mas wah kui talent anang composing and stuff. but when i feel a lot of emotions, especially knang ma.depress ko, i am able to write something out of the ordinary. hahahaha. XD
ahahh! BecauSe uR Extra ordinary…
ahehhehhe!
i knoW you can makE It…
aehheh!
Thats For sure.,..
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