I am no a poet! Writing is not my passion actually… not good at it. But what I have now is something very new. Lolz!I created a poem! So lolz!
I don’t know how to construct it, what steps to follow or what kind of poem would I create, but I’ve read a lot of poems these days! So nose-bleeding. Maybe they were the reasons why I composed mine.
Actually, I started making it when heading for home just this afternoon. I even had a long walk just to dig my brain and gather flowering words.
“in SOLITUDE” is my working title.
I hope you will have time criticizing, commenting or suggesting.
It would be highly appreciated!
memories… breeze in, expeditiously as a wind; in a seventh heaven, or under the moon not shinin’.
halting it, is no possible like gushing river so unstoppable; purposely and endlessly, it will always heavenly stay.
best if clouds are nine, a moment to unwind; worst when hell freezes over, a time to suffer.
myriad-star memories, so vast so countless; it will forever intrude, … in SOLITUDE!
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cayoo budy and good luck 4 u my friends
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admin Reply:
July 24th, 2009 at 1:05 am
thankS…
gooDluCk to you Too..
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i sense the feeling of aloneness… retrospective thoughts? Magaling!
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admin Reply:
July 24th, 2009 at 1:05 am
aheheh! wla lng magawa.. ahehheh!
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thank you So muCh…
ill be creating more if my powers can..
aehheh!
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love your post..got carried away!
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admin Reply:
July 24th, 2009 at 1:28 am
sure?
ahehehh! wala kabang Comment? aheheh!
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the poem is ok..it is somehow made me nosebleed..wahehe
thanksness!
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admin Reply:
July 24th, 2009 at 2:11 am
toinkS…wahahah!
cg!
thanks For Commenting again…wahahh! love youR altest Post pala….
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The Lady in Green Ruffles Reply:
July 24th, 2009 at 4:34 am
thanx din..
ok lang ung length nya
pero parang medyo short
pero ok na rin xe u delivered the message well
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admin Reply:
July 24th, 2009 at 4:36 am
wahahhah!
DumuduDo na nga utak ko sa kakaisip lng Words…
esp in Ryming…
whahah!
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The Lady in Green Ruffles Reply:
July 24th, 2009 at 4:38 am
pwede ka din naman magcompose ng free writing e..prose
diba
gogogo
try and try lang!
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admin Reply:
July 24th, 2009 at 4:40 am
wahhaH!
seGuru iT takes a special moment to Compose..
wahhah! hayaan moh…iF emo Uli ako..
maybe i cud compOse onE!
The Lady in Green Ruffles Reply:
July 24th, 2009 at 4:42 am
korek! panapanahon lang yan..basta post mo ulit ha..
admin Reply:
July 24th, 2009 at 4:44 am
oH Sure….
aheheh! ill be preparing tissue along with me… para naman i CuD wipE my NoSe bleeding …aheheh!
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The Lady in Green Ruffles Reply:
July 25th, 2009 at 5:13 am
go go go
gusto mo ako na magprovide ng tissue
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admin Reply:
July 25th, 2009 at 8:44 am
cg bah…
aheheh!
dapt facial Tissur hap…wahaha!
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The Lady in Green Ruffles Reply:
July 27th, 2009 at 2:38 am
oo ba, no prob!
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admin Reply:
July 27th, 2009 at 3:15 am
ahheehe! dito ka naman uli..
ahheheheh!
The Lady in Green Ruffles Reply:
July 28th, 2009 at 1:15 am
bakit, ayaw mo b?
admin Reply:
July 28th, 2009 at 1:35 am
ahehehe! k lng naman… ahhahha
that was very nice.i felt so relaxed and the words were just settling in me. twas like reminiscing the heavenly past. this poem feels good.
nice! ^_^
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admin Reply:
July 24th, 2009 at 2:29 am
thank you So Much…. ^_^
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that was great. it takes an inspiration for me to compose a poem esp when i’m deeply sad.
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admin Reply:
July 24th, 2009 at 3:23 am
i had a hard time composing it…
especially the last part….
ahehehe!
Thanks for the comment.
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hmmm..eto nosebleed…hahaha
sometimes you need it
being alone doesnt mean your lonely
you just have to feel it and experience it so that you know how to be happy…
teka… tama ba pinagsasabi ko dito?
hehehe
nakanang.. basta un na un..
nice post..
\m/
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admin Reply:
July 24th, 2009 at 4:37 am
wahah !enx sa Comment….
yeah Being alone iS good …. but not all the time hap.
aehheh!
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Hmmm poetic na kaayo si Mark o. Nosebleed pa jud ayo ug words… ^:)^
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admin Reply:
July 24th, 2009 at 9:50 am
Sure bry oi…
wahah! paila nas y linGaw…
wahahha!
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it’s actually very nice
keep it up…
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admin Reply:
July 24th, 2009 at 1:00 pm
really?
ahehhehe!
im still not confident about it….
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you are so makata, congrats for that poem…
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admin Reply:
July 24th, 2009 at 1:01 pm
wahhahha!
1st time poh…
thanks poh pala sa pag CommeNt…
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This is nice.. you have a blood of an artist.. keep it up =)
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admin Reply:
July 24th, 2009 at 11:35 pm
really? im Flattered! Lolx..
thanKs..
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hehe, nice poem! I love it, hope I could compose something like that too..:)
gudluck!
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admin Reply:
July 25th, 2009 at 2:06 am
wahhaha! try kalang..
i knoW u can create too..
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Cool poem. You have the potential. keep it up
added you already in my blogroll. i’d appreciate it if u do the same.
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admin Reply:
July 25th, 2009 at 3:46 am
oh! thankS….
added you Too..
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EMo??? hehe
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admin Reply:
July 25th, 2009 at 3:51 am
wahahha! Not really~ aheheh
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rhyme, rhyme!
and the photo suggest ’solitude.’
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admin Reply:
July 25th, 2009 at 8:45 am
aheheheh!
wala lang!
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sounds good but i have no talent in interpreting poems. Hehehe
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admin Reply:
July 26th, 2009 at 12:40 am
ahehhhe!
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With that, you’re a poet na Marky!
Good thing, you’ve showcased you Poetic site as well.
Good one!
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admin Reply:
July 26th, 2009 at 1:35 am
nah Mag Sure ta X oi…
wahhah!
salamat sa Time sa Pag Comment…
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your poem is promising, actually! yay for that
) continue with it..
you could also read Pablo Neruda’s poems. i love his works XD
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admin Reply:
July 27th, 2009 at 12:44 am
aha! aha! TnX aimEE…
hOpe i Cud have that Moment again…
wahhah!
tnx also for Sharing… aweee…
sure ill be reading that poems you sharEd!
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wow.the poem is really deep.
hindi ko kayang gumawa ng ganito.hehe
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admin Reply:
July 27th, 2009 at 12:45 am
ahahha! kaya Ko yan Dude!
gawa ka lang…
u Too will be Shocked!
ahahhah! TnX for commenting…
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nice one OMG! hahaha.
mas wah kui talent anang composing and stuff. but when i feel a lot of emotions, especially knang ma.depress ko, i am able to write something out of the ordinary. hahahaha. XD
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admin Reply:
July 27th, 2009 at 12:46 am
ahahh! BecauSe uR Extra ordinary…
ahehhehhe!
i knoW you can makE It…
aehheh!
Thats For sure.,..
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you’re doing good! simple pero rock na poem! Keep it up..=)
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admin Reply:
July 27th, 2009 at 5:48 am
wahhah!
tnX soooo much…ahehhe!
nahan kayu ko ana nga linE…
SimPle pEru roCk..ahehheh!
tnX gain!
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ayoko ng masyadong malungkot na poem kasi malungkot na ang buhay ko sa dubai kaya daoat hindi na mag dwell sa ganitong feelings.
try to find hapines, sigurado ako hindi mo lang nakikita pero meron yan, maniwala ka lang
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admin Reply:
July 28th, 2009 at 9:30 am
aha! agree with you….
den mag enjot ka lang ja nsa Dubai…
aheheh!
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Hi Mark,
I guess there’s no right or wrong in writing a poem, as long as you had expressed your feelings. It’s just like a music without the hymn. I used to write poems when I was in high school
God Bless,
Madz
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admin Reply:
July 29th, 2009 at 2:27 am
aheheh!
tnX you so Much….
aheheh!
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OMG! tissue hahahahaha
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admin Reply:
August 8th, 2009 at 12:37 pm
wahahah! … na hala panrapo..
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halu! im beck!
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mark Reply:
September 4th, 2009 at 9:31 pm
ahehhehe! May Ne Post ako… Punta ka sa HoMe page Ko.. ahhhehh! …Comment ka ha? ahehheh!
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nice blog
keep writing
Oh Porous Sky
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