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by admin on July 23, 2009

I am no a poet! Writing is not my passion actually… not good at it. But what I have now is something very new. Lolz!I created a poem! So lolz!

I don’t know how to construct it, what steps to follow or what kind of poem would I create,   but I’ve read a lot of poems these days! So nose-bleeding. Maybe they were the reasons why I composed mine.

Actually, I started making it  when heading for home just this afternoon. I even had a long walk just to dig my brain and  gather flowering words.

“in SOLITUDE” is my working title.

I hope you will have time criticizing, commenting or suggesting.

It would be highly appreciated!

memories… breeze in,
expeditiously as a wind;
in a seventh heaven,
or under the moon not shinin’.

halting it, is no possible
like gushing river so unstoppable;
purposely and endlessly,
it will always heavenly stay.

best if clouds are nine,
a moment to unwind;
worst when hell freezes over,
a time to suffer.

myriad-star memories,
so vast so countless;
it will forever intrude,
… in SOLITUDE!

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ErickaPeck March 19, 2010 at 4:23 am

I guess that to receive the loans from banks you ought to have a great motivation. But, one time I’ve received a car loan, just because I was willing to buy a building.

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Suckingbird Keller February 16, 2010 at 10:22 am

nice blog :) keep writing

Oh Porous Sky

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The Lady in Green Ruffles September 4, 2009 at 9:29 pm

halu! im beck!

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mark September 4, 2009 at 9:31 pm

ahehhehe! May Ne Post ako… Punta ka sa HoMe page Ko.. ahhhehh! …Comment ka ha? ahehheh!

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zyza August 8, 2009 at 12:36 pm

OMG! tissue hahahahaha

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admin August 8, 2009 at 12:37 pm

wahahah! … na hala panrapo..

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madz July 29, 2009 at 2:21 am

Hi Mark,

I guess there’s no right or wrong in writing a poem, as long as you had expressed your feelings. It’s just like a music without the hymn. I used to write poems when I was in high school :)

God Bless,
Madz

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admin July 29, 2009 at 2:27 am

aheheh!
tnX you so Much….
aheheh!

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dencios July 28, 2009 at 9:03 am

ayoko ng masyadong malungkot na poem kasi malungkot na ang buhay ko sa dubai kaya daoat hindi na mag dwell sa ganitong feelings.

try to find hapines, sigurado ako hindi mo lang nakikita pero meron yan, maniwala ka lang :)

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admin July 28, 2009 at 9:30 am

aha! agree with you….

den mag enjot ka lang ja nsa Dubai…

aheheh!

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Pink Note July 27, 2009 at 5:46 am

you’re doing good! simple pero rock na poem! Keep it up..=)

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admin July 27, 2009 at 5:48 am

wahhah!
tnX soooo much…ahehhe!
nahan kayu ko ana nga linE…

SimPle pEru roCk..ahehheh!

tnX gain!

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Mikyu July 26, 2009 at 11:47 am

nice one OMG! hahaha. :P
mas wah kui talent anang composing and stuff. but when i feel a lot of emotions, especially knang ma.depress ko, i am able to write something out of the ordinary. hahahaha. XD

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admin July 27, 2009 at 12:46 am

ahahh! BecauSe uR Extra ordinary…

ahehhehhe!

i knoW you can makE It…

aehheh!

Thats For sure.,..

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