in Solitude!

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I am no a poet! Writing is not my passion actually… not good at it. But what I have now is something very new. Lolz!I created a poem! So lolz!

I don’t know how to construct it, what steps to follow or what kind of poem would I create,   but I’ve read a lot of poems these days! So nose-bleeding. Maybe they were the reasons why I composed mine.

Actually, I started making it  when heading for home just this afternoon. I even had a long walk just to dig my brain and  gather flowering words.

“in SOLITUDE” is my working title.

I hope you will have time criticizing, commenting or suggesting.

It would be highly appreciated!

memories… breeze in,
expeditiously as a wind;
in a seventh heaven,
or under the moon not shinin’.

halting it, is no possible
like gushing river so unstoppable;
purposely and endlessly,
it will always heavenly stay.

best if clouds are nine,
a moment to unwind;
worst when hell freezes over,
a time to suffer.

myriad-star memories,
so vast so countless;
it will forever intrude,
… in SOLITUDE!

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  • Mikyu

    nice one OMG! hahaha. :P
    mas wah kui talent anang composing and stuff. but when i feel a lot of emotions, especially knang ma.depress ko, i am able to write something out of the ordinary. hahahaha. XD

    • http://markg87.net/ admin

      ahahh! BecauSe uR Extra ordinary…

      ahehhehhe!

      i knoW you can makE It…

      aehheh!

      Thats For sure.,..

  • Aimee

    your poem is promising, actually! yay for that :) ) continue with it..
    you could also read Pablo Neruda’s poems. i love his works XD

    • http://markg87.net/ admin

      aha! aha! TnX aimEE…
      hOpe i Cud have that Moment again…
      wahhah!

      tnx also for Sharing… aweee…

      sure ill be reading that poems you sharEd!

  • http://obnoxiousqueer.com Obnoxious Queer

    With that, you’re a poet na Marky!

    Good thing, you’ve showcased you Poetic site as well.

    Good one!

    • http://markg87.net/ admin

      nah Mag Sure ta X oi…
      wahhah!

      salamat sa Time sa Pag Comment…

  • http://axrealm.com Ax

    rhyme, rhyme!

    and the photo suggest ‘solitude.’

    • http://markg87.net/ admin

      aheheheh!
      wala lang!

  • sweetham

    sounds good but i have no talent in interpreting poems. Hehehe :)

    • http://markg87.net/ admin

      ahehhhe!

  • http://www.monzavenue.com Mon

    Cool poem. You have the potential. keep it up :)
    added you already in my blogroll. i’d appreciate it if u do the same. :)

    • http://markg87.net/ admin

      oh! thankS….

      added you Too..

  • http://angpogingpinoy.blogspot.com Goryo Dimagiba

    This is nice.. you have a blood of an artist.. keep it up =)

    • http://markg87.net/ admin

      really? im Flattered! Lolx..

      thanKs..

  • Blogfornoob Dot Com

    EMo??? hehe

    • http://markg87.net/ admin

      wahahha! Not really~ aheheh

  • RockmanderZ

    hehe, nice poem! I love it, hope I could compose something like that too..:)

    gudluck!

    • http://markg87.net/ admin

      wahhaha! try kalang..
      i knoW u can create too..

  • http://jodispride.blogspot.com jodi

    you are so makata, congrats for that poem…

    • http://markg87.net/ admin

      wahhahha!
      1st time poh…

      thanks poh pala sa pag CommeNt… :)

  • http://www.goodmorningpancakes.blogspot.com Bailey

    it’s actually very nice ;) keep it up…

    • http://markg87.net/ admin

      really?
      ahehhehe!
      im still not confident about it….

  • http://bryankarl.net Bryan Karl

    Hmmm poetic na kaayo si Mark o. Nosebleed pa jud ayo ug words… ^:)^

    • http://markg87.net/ admin

      Sure bry oi…
      wahah! paila nas y linGaw…
      wahahha!

  • http://glimpse-neaquino.blogspot.com nuts

    that was great. it takes an inspiration for me to compose a poem esp when i’m deeply sad.

    • http://markg87.net/ admin

      i had a hard time composing it…

      especially the last part….

      ahehehe!

      Thanks for the comment.

  • http://kwentuhan.wordpress.com akda

    that was very nice.i felt so relaxed and the words were just settling in me. twas like reminiscing the heavenly past. this poem feels good.

    nice! ^_^

    • http://markg87.net/ admin

      thank you So Much…. ^_^

  • http://markg87.net/ admin

    thank you So muCh…
    ill be creating more if my powers can..

    aehheh!

  • shea

    hmmm..eto nosebleed…hahaha

    sometimes you need it

    being alone doesnt mean your lonely

    you just have to feel it and experience it so that you know how to be happy…

    teka… tama ba pinagsasabi ko dito?
    hehehe

    nakanang.. basta un na un..

    nice post..

    m/

    • http://markg87.net/ admin

      wahah !enx sa Comment….

      yeah Being alone iS good …. but not all the time hap.

      aehheh!

  • The Lady in Green Ruffles

    the poem is ok..it is somehow made me nosebleed..wahehe

    thanksness!

    • http://markg87.net/ admin

      toinkS…wahahah!

      cg!

      thanks For Commenting again…wahahh! love youR altest Post pala….

      • The Lady in Green Ruffles

        thanx din..

        ok lang ung length nya

        pero parang medyo short

        pero ok na rin xe u delivered the message well

        • http://markg87.net/ admin

          wahahhah!

          DumuduDo na nga utak ko sa kakaisip lng Words…

          esp in Ryming…

          whahah!

          • The Lady in Green Ruffles

            pwede ka din naman magcompose ng free writing e..prose

            diba

            gogogo

            try and try lang!

            • The Lady in Green Ruffles

              korek! panapanahon lang yan..basta post mo ulit ha..

            • http://markg87.net/ admin

              wahhaH!

              seGuru iT takes a special moment to Compose..

              wahhah! hayaan moh…iF emo Uli ako..
              maybe i cud compOse onE!

    • http://markg87.net/ admin

      oH Sure….

      aheheh! ill be preparing tissue along with me… para naman i CuD wipE my NoSe bleeding …aheheh!

      • The Lady in Green Ruffles

        go go go

        gusto mo ako na magprovide ng tissue

        • http://markg87.net/ admin

          cg bah…

          aheheh!

          dapt facial Tissur hap…wahaha!

          • The Lady in Green Ruffles

            oo ba, no prob!

            • http://markg87.net/ admin

              ahheehe! dito ka naman uli..

              ahheheheh!

            • The Lady in Green Ruffles

              bakit, ayaw mo b?

              • http://markg87.net/ admin

                ahehehe! k lng naman… ahhahha

  • The Lady in Green Ruffles

    love your post..got carried away!

    • http://markg87.net/ admin

      sure?

      ahehehh! wala kabang Comment? aheheh!

  • http://www.vinceleste.com/blog brVince

    i sense the feeling of aloneness… retrospective thoughts? Magaling! :)

    • http://markg87.net/ admin

      aheheh! wla lng magawa.. ahehheh!

  • http://butikupalace.blogspot.com ritz

    cayoo budy and good luck 4 u my friends

    • http://markg87.net/ admin

      thankS…

      gooDluCk to you Too..

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